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wirk in progress is the title, not the state of this pic 8l the picture is done.

lol.... this is the first ever traditional pic i had to actually edit besides eraseing white backgrounds TTuTT

it wasnt much but still. . . the pen bled on erin's nose so i had to fix that in PS TTuTT

anywho~ this took awhile and im still not likeing how it came out colored :( it looks. . . bleh. . .

but yeah. . . .it took awhile and plz plz plz critique!~

wingman and erin belong to me.

Critiques


:iconpegasusj19:
I like this picture. Although, the coloring seems a bit off, but it still looks good.

Perhaps work a bit on the anatomy, and make the buildings a bit more 3D, but over all a very nice image. I do like the placement of the the stickers on the trash can and the blood on the wall. I also like the trees and the sky coloring.

I like how the person is leaning on the wall, that makes it look a bit better. Also, the way the lighting was placed, gives it that awesome night look. XD

Anywayas, nice drawing.
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:iconradioactive-blowout:
First off, let me just say how much I love this picture. You are getting so good at drawing backgrounds and adding details. It's fantastic. Plus, your hands are great. I don't know how you get them proportioned so correctly. I really do like the coloring--I think it blends together nicely.

Alright, crit time. The main things that jump out at me are Wingman's legs. In most people, thighs almost always touch unless you have some kind of wierd genetic trait about your legs or you have a serious eating disorder. This is even more true for guys because they have all that junk up in their trunk (whatwhaaat). And I know that he's supposed to be standing with his legs spred a bit, but looking at the crotch area, it seems like he's a Barbie doll down there. His left arm is also posed a little awkwardly. I tried putting my hand on my hip that way, and you have to twist your forearm uncomfortably to get that look. Erin is perfect--the only thing that looks a little wierd is her right foot, but that could really just be me. And the only thing wrong with the background is that the bricks behind Erin aren't really drawn in the same perspective that the building follows.

I can't give you any crit on the coloring at all :"D sorry.

So, yeah. This is such a great piece. I'd really like to know all the symbolism that you put into here. Awesome.
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:iconarii-suzuki:
Well, its done now ^^ I think it looks awesome and the coloring looks kewl ^^ I really like it! Nice work x3

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:iconsoren11d6:
ty!!~ <333

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"Dear God, Please make my son gay or I will drown him."

-Soren
:iconarii-suzuki:
oh no, ty!! lolz

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:iconamaranta8:
omg i luv it so much!!! ^^ im jealous! i cnt wait til i get that good!! (if i get that good) lol

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Yeah, I'm an aspiring anime/manga digital artist ^^
:iconamaranta8:
ps i also luv the lil geiko money stack pic on the dumpster!!!!!

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Yeah, I'm an aspiring anime/manga digital artist ^^
:iconsoren11d6:
lol you will you wil! but when you do, you'll still think your pictures stink TTuTT

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"Dear God, Please make my son gay or I will drown him."

-Soren
:iconamaranta8:
lol yea probly. no matter how good u get u'll always catch sumtin wrong wit ur art ^^ but i still wanna get as good as u!!

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Yeah, I'm an aspiring anime/manga digital artist ^^
:iconsoren11d6:
lol XDD just keep practiceing!! I can already tell your getting better!~

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"Dear God, Please make my son gay or I will drown him."

-Soren
:iconamaranta8:
yay!

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Yeah, I'm an aspiring anime/manga digital artist ^^

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