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Critiques
Perhaps work a bit on the anatomy, and make the buildings a bit more 3D, but over all a very nice image. I do like the placement of the the stickers on the trash can and the blood on the wall. I also like the trees and the sky coloring.
I like how the person is leaning on the wall, that makes it look a bit better. Also, the way the lighting was placed, gives it that awesome night look. XD
Anywayas, nice drawing.
Alright, crit time. The main things that jump out at me are Wingman's legs. In most people, thighs almost always touch unless you have some kind of wierd genetic trait about your legs or you have a serious eating disorder. This is even more true for guys because they have all that junk up in their trunk (whatwhaaat). And I know that he's supposed to be standing with his legs spred a bit, but looking at the crotch area, it seems like he's a Barbie doll down there. His left arm is also posed a little awkwardly. I tried putting my hand on my hip that way, and you have to twist your forearm uncomfortably to get that look. Erin is perfect--the only thing that looks a little wierd is her right foot, but that could really just be me. And the only thing wrong with the background is that the bricks behind Erin aren't really drawn in the same perspective that the building follows.
I can't give you any crit on the coloring at all :"D sorry.
So, yeah. This is such a great piece. I'd really like to know all the symbolism that you put into here. Awesome.
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